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The words she never said.

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My third attempt at working with human images [abstracted]. My sister and I spent three hours this morning photographing each other in different lighting, makeup, and backgrounds. Thusfar, I'm pleased with the outcome..

Comments, opinions, and Crits would be great!
Image size
1000x695px 256.38 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot A1100 IS
Shutter Speed
1/125 second
Aperture
F/2.7
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
125
Date Taken
Nov 17, 2012, 11:10:05 AM
Sensor Size
1mm
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Overall, I'd say very nice work. The color of the red heart marble really does stand out and the lip shine draws my attention even more. Though there are many photos with things in people's mouths, this one has it's own little twist.

I personally like how it is zoomed really far, it gives more mystery to the emotion behind the words 'not said'. Great job on the lighting, gives the lips a shine as well as the marble ( though next time I'd recomend you somehow lessen the harshness of the glare ).

The vision is nice, great job experimenting, and it leaves me with a good feeling inside, yet wanting more..

You're lucky to have a sister who coorperates like that, mine would never do such a thing.